What we're supposed to be doing isn't this, and what we promised you in the publicity or in the brochures isn't what we're doing now.
This idea of 'isn't this' seems important. What we're doing by including moments that happened outside of the text like 'Can we have the other light on' and 'I'll just read it through' is a way of not doing what we're supposed to be doing. Like opening up the tabs and taking down the lights. I write down the moments in the scene where Tim reads around the text not from it.
Can we have the other light on
It's bit dingy
That all right?
I'll just read it through
Just from the very top
We've changed that bit
That's where he leaves
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